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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-10-04 07:33 PM



Worthy of A Lie


My precious friend
I only ask that
you try.

Don't lie to me
and then walk
away from me,

like I'm only
worthy of
a lie.


JamesLee
03October
2006



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Magnus
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1 posted 2006-10-04 08:21 PM


Now, that would surely sting....
gypsyheartx
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2 posted 2006-10-04 09:03 PM


I like this a lot... short but to the point. Some very strong emotions in here I could relate too. Thanks for sharing
passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-10-04 10:14 PM


darn straight!
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-10-04 11:06 PM


yup!
this one has a
stinger in its tail
nice work James...


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2006-10-05 07:38 PM


Thank you Magnus, gypsyheartx, passing shadows and Lady for the nice responses...James
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