As you rise, pull me under

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Open Poetry #39

As you rise, pull me under

IntoTheRain
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 51
Westwood, CA

0 posted 2006-10-04 06:05 PM

They've ended now, the dances
The feathered snow has left us in a trance
A clamor of thoughts unheard
Like footsteps, neither near nor far away

May the overture begin again
For a time, drawing each of us that listens
To feel like falling for a time and yet as always
We do not recognize

a last attempt to fill an exhausted form,
to know once more the ordeal of wound
by hand and eye. To know the source of burning

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-10-04 06:19 PM

A wonderful write.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-10-04 10:09 PM

yes, wonderful, I agree

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2006-10-05 07:40 PM

Enjoyed...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-10-06 12:21 PM

excellent Rob
love the ending...

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