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miscellanea
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0 posted 2006-10-04 01:18 PM



Breathe my beauty, breathe.

Take the seed

and watch it slow

ly grow.

Breathe, my beauty breathe.




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mrmojorisin5908
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1 posted 2006-10-04 01:29 PM


Great Post! I haven't been on pip for a while... but once I start writing again I come upon a poem that tells me to breathe and it will be FINE. Thanks for the post!

Andrew A.
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2 posted 2006-10-04 01:54 PM



Thanks for the reminder, misc'e!




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3 posted 2006-10-04 02:54 PM


misce

life is so fast...The seed has bloomed sometimes before we see it just before it dies.  

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4 posted 2006-10-04 03:00 PM


Yes...breathe..
Good write..I like this.
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Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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5 posted 2006-10-04 03:50 PM


Words invited me to slow down... format guaranteed that I would. *S* Excellent! *S*
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6 posted 2006-10-04 06:22 PM


This applies to many things in life...These words I can appreciate...
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7 posted 2006-10-04 06:48 PM


This is such a unique and wonderful write.
miscellanea
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8 posted 2006-10-05 04:33 PM


Thanks you, Everyone!  I'm glad you were able to enjoy.  The last couple of weeks have been laden with pressure for me, and it seems like the only way I can cope with it is to steal a moment to write and to think pretty thoughts.  A person can create anything with a pencil-- Even a peaceful atmospere in horrific winds.  Guess I better keep that pencil handy for a while!  Thank you so much for your kind response to my simple poem.  Much appreciated.  

Have a good Friday and coming weekend!

misce'

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