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Open Poetry #39
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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-10-04 10:58 AM



the lakeshore we used to sit
is overgrown now;
tall reeds crowd white lilies,
and memories of you
float in shadows


CG

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fr33lost
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since 2006-10-04
Posts 16
new york
1 posted 2006-10-04 10:59 AM


nice feel..
kinda got a hyku touch..
sentiment wise ya know..

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