Not Just Another Love Song

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Open Poetry #39

Not Just Another Love Song

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

0 posted 2006-10-04 10:18 AM

Not Just Another Love Song

There is one
who walks quiet
through haze of confusion
a mind reeling silent
through ebon abyss
a heart sore in need
of one hopeful seed
to give bloom
to a life deserving of bliss.

for his quiet walk
has taken me to the woodlands
his mind in its silence
has spoken a tome
his heart gave mine wing
now it soars
and it sings
it beckons to him
come follow, be whole.

so adopt as my duty
to part sea of daze
enlist all my energy
to set his world right
claim as my own
his needs and desires
smother the pyres
of flames
show him light.

For I love him so.

fr33lost
Junior Member

since 2006-10-04

Posts 16
new york

1 posted 2006-10-04 11:03 AM

"his heart gave mine wing
now it soars
and it sings"

a very familiar sentiment w/ ur personal lil touch.. i likes..

brief expression w/ depth hinted.
niiiice

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-10-04 11:09 AM

First, welcome to passions. It has been my virtual-home for 6 years now. I hope you find it to be a comfort to you, too.

Secondly, thank you for your response. I appreciate the loan of your eyes to my heart felt endeavor.

Sandra

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