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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-10-04 06:16 AM

Upon awakening this morning
did hues of purple and pink
dance your mind,
and did you take it
as a sign
of what the day
could hold in store,
or did you wish
that you could see more?

Colors of rainbows
turned to black;
did you peel the shades
and turn them back,
to the images
you hold inside
where pale of thoughts
do reside,

and did you hear
a whisper of sigh
when candy visions drifted
from the sky?

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-10-04 07:09 AM

Yes......

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

2 posted 2006-10-04 09:55 AM

Imagery like this...wow.

Great stuff. I enjoyed every line.

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-10-04 10:26 AM

A remarkable write upon which I remark, Remarkable!

Very nice, indeed!

Sandra

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-10-12 06:48 PM

I missed this one Donna
and it's a beauty...

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2006-10-12 07:14 PM

Oh my goodness! This is where I've begun tonight's reading and where I'll stop! Devine imagery! (a must have in the ole library!)

miscellanea

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2006-10-13 07:38 AM

You are all so gracious with your replies, I thank you. Have a fantastic weekend.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2006-10-13 07:48 AM

wow! What a write!

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

8 posted 2006-10-13 10:10 PM

The imagery in this poem is Great!

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

9 posted 2006-10-14 02:09 AM

I am in love with this poem.
Thank you for introducing us.

aziza

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

10 posted 2006-10-16 12:37 PM

Hmmm, very lovely and it provokes your imagination....Great job aunt of mine.

"My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created"~ Disturbed

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2006-10-22 09:34 PM

(does happy pink fairy floss flamenco) Mmmmmmmmm, this sky sounds like it's going to be a tutti-frutti zip-a-dee-doo-dah zydeco, yay! (smiles) You always paint such upbeat, sonorous pictures with your words, yay, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2006-10-24 03:13 AM

I really like this one, Donna. Hope your skys stay candy......jo

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

13 posted 2006-10-24 06:58 AM

Yes - I always sigh when beautiful things pass from sight but I'm glad you saw!

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