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seraphin
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0 posted 2006-10-03 11:42 PM



Each poem I read,
which inspires a thought.
Each time I am moved,
to respond with my seal.
Each time I press
"submit my reply."
I find I am following
at the Lady's heel.

If I follow close enough
might my skirts pick up
some wonder dust
that is shed as she passes
swiftly by
that will allow me to write as she.



© Copyright 2006 Sandra McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-10-03 11:50 PM


wander dust....

I think it's wandering dust....

you do her credit
and I thank you.


seraphin
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2 posted 2006-10-03 11:53 PM


I don't think anyone could do this Lady credit. She is remarkable, and I am in awe of her great gift.

Well, maybe dark could

Thank you for reading.

Sandra

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3 posted 2006-10-04 12:22 PM


wonderful "gift" poem here Sandra

I'm sure she will just adore it!

seraphin
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4 posted 2006-10-04 12:26 PM


Thank you so much.
aziza
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5 posted 2006-10-04 12:34 PM


I love this and feel this way too.  I find that all three of us often are on at the same time, posting and replying.  You both speak with a lot of eloquence .. and I kind of stumble behind, tripping over tongue and feet.

aziza

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6 posted 2006-10-04 01:21 AM



oh
Sandra

what an honor
a sweet compliment
I love it
and I would like to have it
may I?

I always feel I follow you

thank you so much!



seraphin
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7 posted 2006-10-04 07:21 AM


Alison~

You are the epitome of grace! You trip over nothing, especially never your words!

@}~~>~~~ Sandra

seraphin
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8 posted 2006-10-04 07:24 AM


~Kate,

I would be honored to have you use it. In so many ways, I do feel I follow at your heels.

You have a style that ispossible to imitate. One is left just standing in admiration. And, it's not a bad place to stand at all.

Sandra

[This message has been edited by seraphin (10-04-2006 10:23 AM).]

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