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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest

0 posted 2006-10-03 11:29 PM



so
it is you Maria Isabel  
I see your toes around the corner  
hear your soft black eyes call me

you are the reason I am in Spain
ven aqui muchacha
come here girl
que paso?

   me pinché el dedo cogiendo rosas
   I pricked my finger while picking roses
   white and pink
   para usted mi dama
   for you my lady
   it bleeds
   weeps me
   lick it?

si
mi hija
my child
déme dos besos
give me two kisses
one for each cheek
but
la niña is gone

again
I am alone in Spain
silence dissolving
at my ear
y dos besos
one on each cheek

last time I was here
Maria Isabel
was much older  
and
she bade me remember  
un deseo
a craving
yet to come
a longing for answers

I long
y I crave


© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
1 posted 2006-10-03 11:33 PM


You are going to do it again, aren't you? You are going to get me and everyone else on this site hooked on a continuing work in progress. You are going to have us stay up late just in case you post, or get up early, just in case you post, then slam us with an ending that leaves us gasping.

Well bring it on, Lady! I'm ready for it this time!

I love this so much!

Sandra

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-10-03 11:38 PM




Sandra
you make me laugh
I have no idea what
I'm doing
I just know my muse has called me
to Spain...
thank you so very much


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-10-04 06:15 AM


ah and you look so lovely there in Spain sweet lady.  This is beautiful!
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2006-10-04 07:08 AM



I wrote of a mantilla once before...

can't wait to see what paths
Spain will offer up
through your pen
and your
gifts.


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2006-10-04 02:31 PM


It's off to Spain we go..
and I am excited to see where this leads.
Most excellent dear Lady.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Edward Grim
Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina
6 posted 2006-10-04 02:50 PM


Beautiful, I really enjoy reading your work. Flawless from what I can see. Cheers

Once you are truly insane, it’s all picnics with Kafka after that. See, it’s the process of going crazy that you gotta worry about.

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
7 posted 2006-10-04 02:50 PM


Lady...the romance of spain is heavy on the cheeks where a kiss lingers.  You caught me in it.  
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
8 posted 2006-10-04 04:53 PM




gentle Donna
thank you so much


mantillas are so beautiful
mysterious
Karilea
I would love to read
your mantilla poem …
thank you
as always

thank you Nancy  
I’m happy you are coming along…

thank you so much
Edward…

oh Martie  
you know the romance of Spain
thank you…  
dos besos to you


Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2006-10-04 04:53 PM


ladyone, you do such sexy german, enjoyed this lady dance
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
10 posted 2006-10-04 04:56 PM




thank you
dear Stranger...
I love the language you speak
too...


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
11 posted 2006-10-04 07:37 PM


Enjoyed...a friend is saving for an European vacation, and I...James
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
12 posted 2006-10-04 10:45 PM



oops!
I'm feeling a little envy
again James...
have a wonderful time

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