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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-03 09:27 PM



As Always I thank the ones who read my last poem
"Dreaming My Story". And I hope you like this one too!.
This One is one of the few that are not based in any dream but in things that happened.
Also, This is one of the Few that have already a melody attached to it, A part of the melody it's Borrowed from a song i can't remember the name.
Most of you i'm sure you heard it. if any of you desires to guess feel free to do so. you'll help me remembering the name.
Here It Goes:

Love Night

I hear You
You hear Me
We Are Hearing Each Other
And Loving.

A Warm Smile
some Words
Just to understand
that what we feel is true

Some Kisses
Some Hugs
only to think
How Far can we go?

the night is long
and we are here toghether
we have
plenty of time
to think of each other

Some Talk
Some Jokes
Just To Remember
How Did it all Began?

I just Wish
that tonight
never ends
just to be able
to tell you all i feel

sunlight arrived
we are still toghether
both in bed
we are staring
at each other
and telling
only one phrase
I love you.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-10-04 10:11 PM


sounds like a very passionate evening
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