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Open Poetry #39

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CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-10-03 11:40 AM

I dreamed
sunlight streaming in
I woke to find you
watching me sleep

CG

MukkaKukka
Member

since 2006-09-18

Posts 88
Finland

1 posted 2006-10-03 11:51 AM

Woke to find you watching me sleep?

Hows that possible?

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2006-10-03 12:52 PM

In poetry, anything is possible. Even "...I will bring you the stars..." or even "...cow jumped over the moon...". We learn that early.

But thank you for commenting. Means you're reading....

Cheers,

CG

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

3 posted 2006-10-03 01:31 PM

Interesting how something so brief and concise, can be so mesmerizing and intricate.

This is perfect.

Sandra

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2006-10-04 10:51 AM

Thank you, Sandra, for reading and for your kind comments.

CG

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