Half-lifeless retina camera

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Open Poetry #39

Half-lifeless retina camera

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-10-03 05:54 AM

Half-lifeless retina camera
A second to the dying frame

..........click..........

The picture of a lifetime
in rows and crooked lines
notebooks by the hundred
photographs unnumbered

One epic of a lifetime.
The ballad of his mind
red written on white skin,
a perfect nihilist hymn.

A thousand little memoirs
and beautiful old eyesores
lay crying at the window pane
in quintessence of his quatrain.

..........click..........

Half-lifeless retina camera
A second past the dying frame

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

1 posted 2006-10-04 06:31 PM

dang, this was "scary"---but very well done. I think my heart stopped beating for a second...Cool write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-10-04 06:50 PM

Following Marcel.
Very cool write.

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