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Life, Learn To Live
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Life, Learn To Live |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Life, Learn To Live Over The past few years I have learnt a lot about me I’ve learnt about who I am, who I can become and who I will truly never be I’ve travelled the journey they seem to call our life I’ve seen the tears a grown man has cried for his dying wife Life surely isn’t what I expect and I’d rather give it up But I’ve learnt that failure is never an option even if your life is completely messed up. Everybody has a reason to live, a motive to carry on And even when you feel as low as this earth, trust me the journeys just begun Every second of the day another heart is heard weeping, It’s the sound of shattered glass, for another life is bleeding This Young girl is tired and lost inside She’s giving up on it all now. She just can’t find her pride Live life for the people who no longer believe Live life for the moment, grow up and don’t be naïve Live life knowing that tomorrow is a new day and we can face it as a team Live life knowing that world can be whatever you make it, just find your voice, and close your eyes, learn to DREAM!!! |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
An interesting poem and I like the tone. "Live life for the people who no longer believe" It is a nice thought that living twice as much for those who do not wish to anymore might help them. Perhaps, the world might be a better place with more people like you living in it.  "Live life knowing that world can be whatever you make it, just find your voice, and close your eyes, learn to DREAM!!!" Thank you very much for sharing this. "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thankyou very much for your kind words. My teacher told me just the other day that if their were more pepole in the world like me it would be a better place. I only wish that the spirit i have rubs off on all the other pepole. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
inspiring and truthful words. thank you for this. it made my day! |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Marcel, Your words of kindess have touched me deeply and may day has just gotten from horrible to great. Today i have taken 4 steps back from who i was when i wrote this poem but now thanx too you i hvae taken 5 steps foward. Hugs and Kisses Jessica |
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