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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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she has never seen him the picaro his face lies on the other side of the wall his smell climbs the tea roses touches her shoulder as she walks by his voice on the calle his darkness fill her with lust his very presence holds her hand on her pale garden path the tradeswomen bustling skirts generous lips whisper her his demon black curls curved red mouth dulce wrists his wanton grasp she clenches her gown in white hands struggling not to think on the sharp canvas of her nun’s bed she paints herself Goya’s La Maja Desnuda waiting in the light surely tonight he will come her fingers cling to the sharp face of dark winds of hunger sweep her waiting naked in her shame she sings herself to sleep with his song ______________________________ pícaro, perhaps from picar, a rogue calle, street dulce, sweet Goya’s La Maja Desnuda, painting by the Spanish master, Francisco de Goya, a nude woman lying on a bed [This message has been edited by The Lady (10-03-2006 04:04 PM).] |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
My lord, Lady! Can you write or WHAT!!!! Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sandra! thank you so much  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, she writes. And she has stories and stories to unfold.   |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for your kind reply Karilea  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome writing, Lady Kate!  ....*hugs*....jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you jo... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stories and stories...and I will be here to read them all!!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Dixie I'm so glad you're here... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, old charcoal is going to share the bayou water it seems. enjoyed this demonstration of your pen (wink) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your muse is so very kind Kate, and we thank them and are blessed by the words.....Lovely write. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Interesting write, though a bit of research was necessary to fill the gaps... CG |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin’ charcoal man knows he ain’ the only ‘gator in that bayou and a lady can’t live on whiskey alone she gotta have wine now and again ‘sides he don’t mind... ask him (proper lady smile) thank you gentle Donna… CG you’re right... there should be no gaps thank you for your reply |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Sorry, my reply was not properly worded... ...the 'gaps' are good, a challenge, make one research, study and find new things...a treasure hunt, so to speak. CG |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh then CG thank you very much... smile |
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