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ChePacifica
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Ignore Alien Orders

0 posted 2006-10-02 09:36 PM


'Tis
Like the blood
Can find no rest
In the hearts of man

And so must turn
Upon itself
Again and Again

~sc

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seraphin
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1 posted 2006-10-02 09:52 PM


Amazing work. It radiates. So few words, yet they speak volumes. Well done.

Sandra

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-10-02 09:53 PM


jeez
but this one rocks
and hits ME
in the solar plexus

thank you
for the hit

The Lady
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-10-02 09:53 PM



very well done Che...

Martie
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4 posted 2006-10-06 12:34 PM


Indeed!
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