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A Crush
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A Crush |
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banished_fairy Junior Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 31Happy in H*ll, PA |
A CRUSH IT IS SO EASY TO FEEL THE POWER OF YOUTH, NO MATTER WHAT YOUR AGE. THAT EUPHORIC HIGH THAT MAKES YOU FEEL LIGHTER THAN AIR. TO SEE PROMISE INSTEAD OF PUNISHMENT IN THE RISING SUN. JUST HAVE A CRUSH ON SOMEONE. FIND SOMEONE WHO APPEARS TO BE PERFECT.... FUNNY, SMART, ATTRACTIVE, LOVABLE - WHATEVER QUAILTIES APPEAL TO YOU. A PERSON TO INSPIRE YOU TO STAND UP STRAIGHTER, WALK TALLER, DRESS BETTER, SMILE MORE. HAVING A CRUSH MAKES YOU TRY TO IMPROVE YOURSELF IN THE HOPES THAT THEY WILL NOTICE YOU. SOMETIMES THEY DO IMMEDIATELY, SOMETIMES IT TAKES THEM AWHILE. AND THEN THERE ARE SOME THAT COULD CARE LESS. BUT THAT IS OK, BECAUSE A CRUSH HELPS YOU DECIDE THE YOU THAT FITS. SO TO MY CRUSH (and he knows who he is) THANK YOU. EVEN IF YOU ARE NOT INTERESTED IN ME THAT WAY, YOU ARE STILL MY FRIEND. AND THAT IS ALWAYS SOMETHING I NEED. I WISH YOU ALL THE HAPPINESS IN THE WORLD AND HOPE I GET TO BE EVEN A SMALL PART OF IT. |
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william foos Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77schenectady,new york,usa |
as soon as the other person tells me how to act or dress they are out of the door since you wanted me for who i am in the first place this can not nor should be changed great write keep doing well love the papa i see what i write and write what i see |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Best of luck...crushes can go south or north.... Let us hope that it goes the right direction... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Amy crushes are learning experiences so are poems keep writing... you're doing fine! |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
Awww, this is so nice  I find the way you write intriguing. I hope that you continue to post on here. It's nice to see someone not obsessed with metre like myself! I enjoyed this a great deal. I like the phrase "appears perfect". I myself was never able to make such a distinction, and such things lead to disappointment. "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
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