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sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

0 posted 2006-10-02 01:06 PM


A Loving Heart

At times I sit alone and think of how my life’s been spent
Of all the many things I’ve done and what it all has meant
How fortunate that I have been to have the life I’ve had
To be a son, a brother, and I hope, a loving Dad

I've been blest in many ways along the road of life
And I am truly thankful to have shared it with my wife
She’s been my loving partner and my very treasured friend
And when my journey’s over I hope she’s with me at the end

Though it hasn’t all been easy we have always stood the test
And when I’m down it seems that she is always at her best
A better one to share life with I know I couldn’t find
And I am overjoyed to have my heart with her entwined

I hope that through the coming years as we grow old and gray
That she and I will be together each and every day
The shining golden nugget band I gave her at the start
Seems a very tiny payment for a gentle loving heart


© Copyright 2006 Stephen E. Washam - All Rights Reserved
william foos
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since 2006-09-13
Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa
1 posted 2006-10-02 07:44 PM


a heart that beats as one
with or without a daughter or a son
if it is to be so shall it be
the only thing is it takes time to see

great write keep doing well
love the papa

i see what i write and write what i see

Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
2 posted 2006-10-02 08:49 PM


This was very touching.
(As is most of your work)

Enjoyed this very much!

~Kira

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2006-10-02 09:38 PM


What a sweet, sweet poem...and perfect meter, phrasing and rhyming!  I would venture a guess that she's pretty lucky, too.
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2006-10-02 10:13 PM




good work sewasham
consistently...
this is very sweet

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