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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-10-02 12:04 PM




afraid to love...
as one may ponder
chopping firewood
for fear of getting hurt -

but,
how else
to ward off
the frost?


CG

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XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
1 posted 2006-10-02 12:09 PM


Ah  Well said.   ::smiles::  Saving this one.
Thank you.   :: bows ::

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-10-02 06:03 PM


I trust that you need not chop wood for long.

May the fires that will keep you warm these coming months, be lit by romantic miens.

Loving Light,
EA

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2006-10-03 09:12 AM


I liked this. Honest.
Perhaps, the solution lies in kindling...once the fire is started...the warmth of that melts the apprehension.
Nice write.

Triskaidekaphobia
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...
4 posted 2006-10-03 09:41 AM


How else indeed?

I personally have felt this many times, though I have never been able to put the feeling into words. Thank you for doing so in such a concise and simple way. I think I will have to keep this one.

Thank you for sharing.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

CastleGuard
Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2006-10-03 11:06 AM



XOx Uriah xOX - thank you for the smile and the 'bow'.

Earth Angel - Ahhh...but one must always keep on chopping - else the fire goes out...or, as they say, one must 'work' at a relationship...all that 'coasts' will eventually come to a stop...... P.S. No shortage of romantic miens....though, at times, run short of firewood.....heh.

ThisDiamond - Thank you, yes, the kindling is important....thus romance was invented, or more precisely it was there all along...just needed the spark.

Triskaidekaphobia - Thank you for commenting...and keeping.

CG

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