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Chaos Reigns

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Seymour Tabin
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Rewrite:


Chaos Reigns

Each drop of dew that touches you
Is part the mist of morningís coup?
Circling me a magic shroud
This mist that forms a sailing cloud

This life a world of chaos reign
On land and sea and life in vain
Subject to chaotic law
Reigning with an acid pour

We scramble for our daily needs
With quick replacement of our seeds
But since chaotic is the law
Itís bow to that or nothing more

And those that go beyond the veil
Are swallowed by a Jonah Whale
No mater how the voyage be
We stay the belly of the sea

We are that kingdoms chaos king
Change and changing everything

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Seymour, this is beatiful, as always. Yes, this world is full of chaos.
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Your wisdom is what reigns here, Sy.

And we thank you for your continued gifts
of foresight, and caring.







Thomas1
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Loved this, enjoyed it thoroughly!
The last lines sum up the poem very well, and to me are touching

"We are that kingdoms chaos king
Change and changing everything"
Seymour Tabin
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SmartChick
It's you that are the beauty, I am in the Whale.
Seymour Tabin
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Sunshine
Yes I do.

Thomas1
You are very kind, thank you and welcome to PIP.
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A poet, a painter, a wise gentle man...

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Indeed, lady K, Sy was a wonderfully kind and intelligent man.
 
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