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Open Poetry #39

I want to drown.

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-10-01 11:30 PM

As reservation is for monks
mention not how much I smoke
when intent on getting drunk

Do not count the glasses left
in emptiness, so wistful sad
now of their liquid souls bereft

Just watch as carefully I decant
many souls from camp to camp
in doing mood for mood supplant.

Lend then a numbered note or two
I am out of cash is sorry truth
and still have numbness to pursue.

Utter not "You've had enough"
when I can clearly see I've not
and let me drown with no rebuff

Let me reap another soul or ten
as untold secrets bog me down
that make my heart a mired fen

Mention not those soulless bottles
within the graveyard of my room.
or how you found well hidden vessels
half-spirit full that I consume

Speak not of help you offer now.
So sorry if this lets you down
I cannot stop and know not how.
Now, go away!

I want to drown.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

1 posted 2006-10-01 11:52 PM

Something i can relate to.

The feeling here is more or less close to my own right now.

Go on without me world! Just let me drown!!!

Thank you for the increadable write.

Lots of love...Kira

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