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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent 
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Yesterday was going so well, I don't understand why it didn't work out, but suddenly today, my heart just... fell. When I came over, I saw a smile erupt from your face. We sat around and talked, and burst out in laughter. Why did today have to be so different? why did it have to be more than that? Last night while lying in bed, I told you the thoughts swarming in my head. I just wanna be able to point to you and say "that's him!". I am 18 and you are 22, but I know age doesn't matter to you. We shared everything together for so many years, laughter, scares, and of course, tears. Today we shared something different, something much more meaningful, this action could change everything, if we don't end up together. I left your house feeling so high, but during the drive home my feelings turned upside down. I don't want this to be just that, I want this to be something real. You still haven't told me what you want, haven't told me how you feel. I am going crazy inside without answers, I don't want to ask and look like a child. But please tell me what you are thinking, my brain is freaking out and going wild. [This message has been edited by tearsoflove13762 (10-02-2006 05:55 PM).] |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Laura, I believe i know exactly how u feel, I am 16 and i have just recently met the guy of my dreams and he makes me feel so special. We laugh together and we breathe together and eversince i have begun to be around him my poems have turned into self depressing, blood shedding killers, to poems about butterflys and the smell of flowers. We are perfect together, Except for one thing the AGE GAP, he has just turned 21. Love and Wished Jessica |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow that was great  hunnie* A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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