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oola malla walla dalla (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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a reprise
for my muse...

twilight slips the bayou  
charcoal man sits on verandah  
back to railing    
chouchoot between his knees    
boy sees gator slidin’ by  
makes o mouth  
like his mama  
charcoal man nods
   that ol caimon
   think you    
   sweet meat    
   stay ‘way y’hear?
   keep yo fingers on yo hands
    
screen door flaps open    
lady smiles on her men folk    
sits in rocker  
pushes back sweated hair  
fans herself  
chouchoot falters to her knee  
she lifts him  
fits his mouth to soft mound  
rocks  

across darkening light    
music flows  
oola malla walla dalla  
charcoal man stretches long legs  
adjusts shirt buttons  
feet move to music  
   how long boy gonna do that
   bebette?
   he  walkin’ chile now    

lady kisses fat cheek  
chouchoot gives up sleepy    
milky smile  
he my baby still    
gonna call him t’ char soon?

charcoal man smiles  
pleased with himself
turns in direction of music    
say loberta  
oh poor loberta
girl you tell me where you been  

lady takes chouchoot to his bed  
kneels by her man  
kisses under ear  
sweet spot
slips half moon fingers in his  
allons
moustique wanta eat you    
leave nothing for me  
she slips screen door open  
quiet like  
finger to red lip  
shhhhh
the chouchoot  

music is soft  
tipitina tra la la la
whoa la la la-ah tra la la la  
charcoal man looks to Panama    
hanging on nail  
lady passes him pair of eyes  

she twirls her pretty self
sauce picante    
lives in yonder now

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 10-01-2006 06:03 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

You capture such a good feeling here...
The bayou, the sunset...well worn love.
Such pleasures.
The Lady
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2 posted 10-01-2006 06:05 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



thank you TD...
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


3 posted 10-01-2006 08:17 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh my how I love these...
Good to find another here this evening.
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 10-01-2006 08:42 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

What a pleasant surprise to find those two captivating southern souls coming to life once more!


Linda
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5 posted 10-01-2006 09:11 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Ahhhhhh, good.  I knew it wasn't quite over.  A good love...

is never over.

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6 posted 10-01-2006 09:44 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Gotta give it to ya, you can spin a good
story...
Kira Aso
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Truly something special in your work.

Loved this poem much!!!
The Lady
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8 posted 10-02-2006 12:57 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



thank you Nancy  
I thought it was over    
but my muse wanted more

I think it’s just a little peek
Linda  
but who knows…

oh so true Karilea!
I hope he doesn’t start cutting up again…
but you know what he’s like

thank you so much Barry!

thank you Kira…

iliana
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You treat us again, Lady!  This could be a lifetime....a poem a week or a poem a month, keep it comin'.  I see these folks.....encore, encore!  *hugs*....jo
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10 posted 10-02-2006 07:09 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ladyone..lucky little sucker
gets to have the candy
and the gator tooth too

enjoyed it ms
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11 posted 10-02-2006 08:16 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

I knew we would see our favorite couple back upon these pages of blue again someday Lady.....ah yes....the journey continues....Very nicely done, Kate.
seraphin
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Thank you so much!

The dreamer in me wants so to believe that there is a "happily ever after".
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i love your poetry
i love the story

romance goes on...
The Lady
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thank you jo
I have missed them…

Stranger
you triflin’ rogue  
makin’ me laugh  
thank you…

thank you Donna  
maybe they have
become a happy couple  
still  
he seems a little restless…

ah Sandra…
I just HAD to see how they were doing  
thank you so much

thank you Helen
yes romance always goes on
when all else is gone…
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smiles ~ just smiles.
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