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Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-09-30 10:57 AM




Oh, get a new fear.
That ones been used
and over abused.
Year after year.
I just don't care anymore.

"Hurts when they don't call me back.
Do you think he will?
I'm think that I might look fat in black
Do you think I do?"

Why must you make everything worse?
Why do you think you're the only one hurt?
If you think you look fat why dress in black?
Don't you know why you're treated like dirt?

Oh, I'm so fed up.
the same every time
that familiar whine
Please shut up
I wish I didn't care anymore..

I wish you could hear just
how many times you say 'me' in one day.
I wish you could see just
how much I wish you'd look my way.

I wish you could hear just
how much I say your name in one day
I wish that I wasn't just
waiting on you.

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2006-09-30 12:41 PM


There are probably so many who feel this way.
Some people think abuse is only when someone
is physically abused, but mental and verbal abuse
hurts hust as bad. In fact, the scars last longer.

A good poem that made me think.
Hugs,
Ethel

suthern
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Member Seraphic
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Louisiana
2 posted 2006-10-03 10:07 AM


I wish you could see just
how much I wish you'd look my way.

I wish you could hear just
how much I say your name in one day
I wish that I wasn't just
waiting on you.

Oh... how well I know this!!! Being invisible is the pits, isn't it? *S* Excellent write!!

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
3 posted 2006-10-03 01:55 PM


This is so related to! I feel this way, I feel this way, I do the black clothes thing!!! I feel this way!

Good job of capturing so many of us in the privacy of our own minds.

Sandra

Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
4 posted 2006-10-03 02:14 PM


Oh, I'm so fed up.
the same every time
that familiar whine
Please shut up
I wish I didn't care anymore..

You know how to say what's on your mind!
I relate to this too as do so many others.

Love it lots!!!

~Kira

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA
5 posted 2006-10-03 11:12 PM


You've touched on something that a lot of people can identify with. Well done. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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