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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-09-30 12:11 PM


When I sleep I sometimes go to that private sanctuary
Where no one is invited but me
My mind takes me on an excursion
to places I may dare not explore while awake
Maybe I am a dancer in his arms or a salacious temptress
Maybe I writhe with wild abandon in a sensual flirtation
Only my mind knows the agenda of slumber
Only it knows the travel plan of my memories and imagination
Locked doors mean nothing, barred windows thrown wide
No barriers between us, just light touch, soft caresses in whispers of dawn
A fantasy kept close under my pillow.
Perhaps it’s only a simple dream – but dreams are randomly accurate

aziza

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-09-30 12:12 PM


Alison, I love how you described this place! I am just about to go there myself LOL

sweet dreams to you

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-09-30 12:17 PM


Thank you so much -- sweet dreams.

Night, night.

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-09-30 12:36 PM




"but dreams are randomly accurate"

what a profound statement this is
my friend...
I like this poem

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2006-09-30 12:40 PM


Okay, I have to - have to - confess.  The line "But dreams are randomly accurate" came from a conversation that I had with a wonderful person whom I love a great deal.  He said it -- and gave me permission to write the poem using his line.  

So, to my friend ... thank you, my co writer.

aziza

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