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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-09-29 04:21 PM


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cash and gasoline

expecting Summer's bounty

greed shines like the Sun

©2006 by icebox
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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2006-09-29 04:28 PM


And yet again, we're on the same page.

I was just having this conversation, and here it is, in perfect poetic form.

I used a whole lot more words though--and most of 'em were against guideline.

(I envy your ability to do these so well.)

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29
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2 posted 2006-09-29 05:22 PM


Hello icebox... I liked your haiku... thought provoking. Looking forward to reading more of you.

Peace, Moonkist

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
3 posted 2006-09-29 06:06 PM


Mr. C., I'd like a book of these, please?!  I mean one that is in print...not a 'book'...enough 'books' to read for now...lol...oh heck, you know what I mean.   *hugs*...jo
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