navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #39 » Firefox Shot Like a Bullet To The Thick Of The Sky (Sage clad in a fur)
Open Poetry #39
Post A Reply Post New Topic Firefox Shot Like a Bullet To The Thick Of The Sky (Sage clad in a fur) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
MukkaKukka
Member
since 2006-09-18
Posts 88
Finland

0 posted 2006-09-29 08:54 AM



Paws soft hissed the ground

Tender.

Golden feathers wrapped in a marshmellowy haze.

Shining.

Hands reached down from sky

Lightning.

Autumn drove a mammal

Cuddled in her Nest.

© Copyright 2006 Petri Pokkinen - All Rights Reserved
MukkaKukka
Member
since 2006-09-18
Posts 88
Finland
1 posted 2006-09-29 09:24 AM


So for midnite Sun, here is my version of the sage of september.

I saw it ears alert, trembling

Fall embodied...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-09-29 09:32 AM


mukka...kewl stuff enjoyed it
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
3 posted 2006-09-29 10:21 AM


Coincidence? just seconds before reading this,
I downloaded an awesome lightning photo for  today's desktop background.
An enjoyable sage write

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-09-29 10:42 AM


"Hands reached down from sky"

~ I doubt I'll ever again be able to look at a lightening strike without thinking of this image you creatively penned!

Love & Light-ening,
EA




MukkaKukka
Member
since 2006-09-18
Posts 88
Finland
5 posted 2006-09-29 12:30 PM


again, if you liked this

Check this out
http://dbgw.finlit.fi/fili/bff/102/ahti.htm

just for fun

"Imagination is mine, says Imagination."

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #39 » Firefox Shot Like a Bullet To The Thick Of The Sky (Sage clad in a fur)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary