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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-09-28 11:32 PM




The night laid jade dreams beneath my shoe,
and a goldenrod sunrise proved dreams come true.

Against a backdrop of deep cobalt blue,
a sigh was released, for the love of two.
Now two souls shall dance, a lifetime through.


~to be continued~

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
seraphin
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1 posted 2006-09-28 11:41 PM


Yep, it hit me right there, in the solar plexus! This is just lovely, and I cannot wait to see just where you take me in its continuence.

Sandra
(overjoyed to have the privilege of posting first reply!)

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2 posted 2006-09-28 11:54 PM


Thanks, Sandra!
I'm waiting too.

iliana
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3 posted 2006-09-29 12:27 PM


Sounds really good, Kacy....I'll watch for more!  
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4 posted 2006-09-29 12:30 PM


love a good love mystery, eh?
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