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Open Poetry #39

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um_idk
Junior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

0 posted 2006-09-28 10:44 PM

i no ive messed up agian and agian
you look at me with tear in your eyes
and ask were you went wrong
all i wont is for you to stay stronge
and give me time
to get straight
i dont wanna live this life no more
i just want to shut this door
mom all i need is for you to be there
i no your hearts filled with fear
but i cant di this on my own
so please will you help mom

this isnt the best wrote it when i was 7th and on drugs

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-09-29 08:49 AM

The emotion came through so very clear in this write. Even then...in 7th grade, your gift was reaching out of it's own accord, imparting a will that still shines after all this time.
Thanks for sharing this.

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

2 posted 2006-09-29 09:08 AM

Well I'm amazed that you were in the 7th grade when you wrote that. Very well expressed.

Although older than you when it happened I had the exact same scene with my mother, only I couldn't ask for help.

I hope you appreciate her. Your mother is probably the only person who will forgive you anything

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

3 posted 2006-09-29 10:58 AM

7th grade? You were obviosly very talented even then. This write was really good!

um_idk
Junior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

4 posted 2006-09-29 03:08 PM

thanks much yous

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