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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Love that saves, dreams so deep. Words like waves, spoken in sleep. Mingled in midnight, entangled until cockcrow. Hearts calmed, light, where roses grow. Fragrant new day, brings beats bold. Hearts together lay, pure blissful gold. Precious souls glistering, my life ageless. Our spirits coruscating, until times endless. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Our spirits coruscating ~*~ Beautiful, Phillip. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very softly penned. Much enjoyed Phil. ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That quietly repeating metric pattern, added to those understated alliterations....this poem is hypnotic! I think I just added a new item to my little poetic picnic basket. Sooner or later, I'm gonna try it myself! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how tender, this very enjoyable |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful as usual from you....much to be expected. ~ARH J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The feeling of so obviously love. Nice! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
A soft, resonant "ahhhhhhhh". Very lovely, indeed. Sandra |
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