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view of toledo from my house |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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scented honey clinging to lips padre strides breast of El Greco hill blessed sacrament fingers folded into cassock sap ridden trees close ranks behind him hiding him from my sight forever I seldom think of man hands I have known except maybe for those he showed me did you see them? capable hands hands that can pull the feeling of want from your mouth need from your soul hands that exact a dear price for iniquity he is but a voz suave behind a screen an ear for my sin voice I have never seen him my confessor yet his picture sits in a sliver frame beside my bed as if for god’s sake he were real |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hands that can pull the feeling of want from your mouth need from your soul hands that exact a dear price for iniquity oh yes, love these lines Kate. Nicely done, Lady. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone..he is lucky to be in the frame by your bed his eyes always open when you dance with shadows enjoyed this ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Donna I value your replies... thank you Stranger he's very beautiful... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gads... may I come sit at your knee and sponge up any dropped words? I know I could knit them into something!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Karilea you make me laugh YOU are the poet let us sit together write poetry and knit sweaters for our grandbabies  thank you... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I seldom think of man hands I have known except maybe for those he showed me" I know this vision. Lady, I do enjoy your writingn so, so much. *hugs*....jo |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
God is in the poet's voice penned with care and pure heartfelt truth it is not full of hate but rather love at it's best and in you my dear Lady lyes a spring to the source of God's blessed heart So spread your wings and fly away basking in his heavenly glow ~loved it! ^_^ ~Jill |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
I loved it all! Your writing is touching and full of passion. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much jo… hugs to you thank you Jill… Kira thank you very much… |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kate Man hands...extraordinary, as is the poetry within these words. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you dear Martie... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Yes, I see them. I see them your artwork of words. aziza |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you aziza... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you James... |
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