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Open Poetry #39

Soul Mirrored

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

0 posted 2006-09-28 10:53 AM

I can see my life reflected in your eyes
And I want to stop my breath
So as to hold onto this moment
In this way, even cheat death

Lost in oceans of violet blue
Drowned in depths that are infinite
How I want to have that feeling
But for now I will only dream of it

The reflection is so intense
More than I, brave enough to bear
For the ache is so daunting
Reaching ever for something not there

And I know that after you’re gone
Empty will be more than the sky is wide
Even as I would breathe again
The soul that is all of me will have died

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-09-28 11:06 AM

wow! that last verse is intense!!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-09-28 08:23 PM

The passion with which you write is drawn from the core of an immortal star.
You speak of love, as I have known it.
A blessing.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-09-28 09:26 PM

Saving this one. I understand these feelings well and this poem is very special to me. Thanks for sharing it.....jo

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