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the day i put my finger in the crack.
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the day i put my finger in the crack. |
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william foos Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 77schenectady,new york,usa |
there was a time a few years ago that i was in the great city of Philly home of the stake sandwich Poe and the Liberty Bell well one day early in the morning we went on a tour and the first one to the bell the old man that led the tour said he would look the other way while we touched it so i the man that i am took my little fist and made a little sound then i took my little finger and felt inside the crack oh yes i almost got it stuck would not that be something for CNN or Fox the bush network ah was that a time or what i did get my finger out after a good tug i see what i write and write what i see |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that's a story and a half, by cracky! lol If ever I visit the Liberty Bell I will be thinking your pinky stuck in its crack!   EA |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Very good! (It made me smile!)I'll never look at the liberty bell the same way! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love this little story, my brother...so glad you kept it and wrote it!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 American version of the little Dutch Boy tale greatly revised...surprise surprise as it should be  enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...I'm surprised they would let someone get so close...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write thanks for sharing the tale |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
lol love it william... |
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