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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2006-09-27 09:01 AM

In the Shy of Morn's Light

There is a moment of peace that with vibration softly hums
when first the earliest light of shy green sunrise quietly comes

Nanosecond split of light breaking away from night
A moments shy of day reveals emerald eyes have come to play

Not many see this emerald revealed in sunrise's prism first unveiled
except those who arise, one with thee, come stand in early, to watch with me

Then through the passage of the day as Sun attends its charted way
There is a moment of peace around that with vibration softly sounds

When too soon the sunset shimmers last and purple layers come to cast
Soft twilight filtering over all and takes with it into the past

Then sets this day in all its bright, soft now into this purple twilight
And in this peace that comes to me, cherish always how it should be

For as day has passed to night, eyes of emerald hold shyest light
And shadows do not stand apart, but meld as one to hold this heart.

~*~

Repost, revised

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-27-2006 09:52 AM).]

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-09-27 09:45 AM

Karilea~
Lovely, lovely, lovely~
I *sigh* at the beauty of the rise-of-sun~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2006-09-27 10:33 AM

Kansas holds many beautiful things seen at certain times of day, yes

and she does inspire!

I loved the last lines especially

Martie

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California

3 posted 2006-09-27 10:42 AM

Sissie...though in California, I think I've been in your morning.....such lovely words!

XOx Uriah xOX
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4 posted 2006-09-27 10:42 AM

Beautiful !    The moment never passes...but in sweet imagination...in which all things pass.
LOL    Blah blah blah
regardless...   Beautiful !

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-09-27 12:44 PM

Exquisite Karilea!
A most beautiful addition to my library.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2006-09-27 12:46 PM

Oh what a beautiful and breathtaking morning you write Mommak!! Lovely work.

Refugee
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7 posted 2006-09-27 12:55 PM

Soft and beautiful as a tranquil morning.

garysgirl

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8 posted 2006-09-27 01:21 PM

This is just so pretty, especially when
I was "seeing" through your words, the
sunrise in my mind's eye.
Huggies,
Ethel

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9 posted 2006-09-27 04:29 PM

This beautiful poem is like Rossetti, it is whistful, yet descriptive in the right areas, creating a fuzzy/clear interweaving, enjoyed this very much and the skill with which it was written, thank you K...

Goldenrose.

Magnus

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10 posted 2006-09-27 05:38 PM

Most beautiful Kari, a very tender poem...
so befitting of that time of day...that
moment.

miscellanea
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OH

11 posted 2006-09-27 08:46 PM

"And shadows do not stand apart, but meld as one to hold this heart."

Sunshine,

You words are cascading little critters! They have such a pretty flow and visual beauty.

So nice to share a moment together!

miscellanea

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12 posted 2006-09-27 09:12 PM

Shy.....I would never have thought to say it that way...but now I doubt that I'll see this time ever again, without the thought.

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The Lady
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The Southwest

13 posted 2006-09-27 10:16 PM

you have written an exquisite
beginning to the day
Karilea

iliana
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14 posted 2006-09-28 03:11 PM

The emerald eyes....I suspect they belong to you, dear SIL. Very lovely poem and I'm keeping it. *hugs*....jo

hoot_owl_rn
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15 posted 2006-09-28 03:45 PM

Someday, my friend, we'll watch mornings first light together after having stayed awake catching up on all these lost years

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