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Open Poetry #39

Felled news woman drowning

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-09-26 03:18 PM

Dear grace, you feel me insanely
With fingered fences you force my excursion
Eyes full ablaze not in passion
Walk with the stagnant silence of my madness
It calls your ready body leeward
Falling into a sandstorm tearing skin from bone
To be the breaking of the waves
A grace of sound, forceful poundings, timeless

I am the two-toed wanderer

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2006-09-26 03:49 PM

Muted One, thy "madness" be not so silent! ~ it screams! ~ albeit poetically!

"It calls your ready body leeward
Falling into a sandstorm tearing skin from bone"

~ Now those be truly stinging words! Very effective imagery!

Loving Light,
EA

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

2 posted 2006-09-26 03:53 PM

thank you, you angel.

I am the two-toed wanderer

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2006-09-28 12:29 PM

Mute maybe...maybe....but do you ever have a ~v~o~i~c~e~! EA's right, this one screams........

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seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

4 posted 2006-09-28 01:39 PM

Always so good to read your thoughts. This one so telling of your talent.

Sandra

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

5 posted 2006-09-28 03:18 PM

thank you all, i believe its been my persona thats been muted so i my soul can emote so loudly
and saraphin, you are of an angels kindness.

I am the two-toed wanderer

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