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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the gods of memory songs hang their ravens on trees like socks without mates but they are all black so they match inconsistently I threw away the love letters I wrote to no one special when I was a boy of forty when dreams still wore gauze and stood at only my window they are on wall street now during a world series celebration from some window they pretend to be butterflies descending on strangers to be stuck in hair and carried to no where quickly to be combed out as if painful and placed in plastic yawning and my heart feels the combs the jagged of the teeth edges perhaps I should call it arousal ____________________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps you should.  'Morning, Sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 good morning... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs..mornin' back at ya |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perhaps.... this gifted wonderful images, though bittersweetly felt...  Morning D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lee j, thanks lady friend, just reality checks sometimes |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Another classic masterpiece. Or is that redundant? I don't know, but as always, enjoying reading the Dark one. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend Ref..thanks so much for the eyes |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger is there sadness caught in your heart comb? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone...nope..just looking back at why I ride and what my soul felt over the years...the burn and the itch...tattoos are not pretty, but I love the pricking feeling one of them kinda gooberscoot pengreasies..thanks ms |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
IF ya have no hair, or very little....you don't have to worry about the teeth getting stuck.... Good write Dark... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Bro Mag..seems I should sooth the ache with a nair weave then? thanks guy for the read |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Indeed you should.....Ok, I officially have a favourite of yours now Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
This made me cry. The ravens did it, somehow symbolic to me these days. You make emotions dance and bow like a weary willow. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mshoney, thank you hon, for the wiggle by. _______________ ms sandra, no need to cry, itis a healed time..thanks |
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