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dream too (duet with Dark Stranger)

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The Lady
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The Southwest


0 posted 09-25-2006 04:04 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady


to dream
in black print
sauce in a white bowl
well mixed
overflowing

the glisten speak
of mind waters
blending with oils
of night ink spend

smarts of eyes
hand covered
sound zips past an ear
shhh
let me hear the shiver of it
nerve endings
so exquisitely tuned

the gypsy strums
a violin with wind
mirrors of clouds
are the echo's mouths
chanting their prayers

butterfly flaps a wing in chile
causing trembling
confused speech
halfway ‘round the world
laughter
hands full of tears
lightly lifted
more?

as colors of rainbows
with wing boundaries
what god draws circles there
on the wound of tears
when the shadows dance
their undulations
under forgotten oceans
tides without moons
to guide their confusion

no dammit no
no
yes
more
please more
lying across
thumb soothing cry mouth
lip fit to lip
warm belly spoon
sleep
to dream
once more
in black print

there is the yawning dawn
on tomorrow's train
arriving on schedule
predictable
like the empty tracks behind
when look backs rewind
but become memories again
playing with themselves
slowly forward

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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ahhhhhhhh 2 of my favs write together
and spin gold
Sunshine
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Yesssssssssssssss....

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 09-25-2006 04:35 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

from two of my favorite poets! Brava!
seraphin
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4 posted 09-25-2006 04:42 PM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

'Bouts time, my friends! Well done
Seymour Tabin
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Lady
Very entertaining, enjoyed. Both of you.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


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EXQUISITE!!  BRAVA!!
May I ask for more?
Hugs to you both~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Martie
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This was a wonder full to ear and mouth!!

Magnus
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Nice,  even hard to pick out one from the
other...You have been studying and working
hard at it....Excellent Duet.
The Lady
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thank you very much Helen…

yessssss indeed Karilea…
thank you

thank you Gentle Spirit!

Sandra  
thank you so much…

Sir Sy
I appreciate you always…

thank you so much Nancy!
hugs to you…

thank you Martie…
I’m glad you enjoyed it

such a nice thing to say Barry
thank you
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 09-26-2006 07:36 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

pipgang, thanks to each of you so much..and to ladyone, thank you for putting my word thorns into such a lovely vase.
LeeJ
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this seems with many faces, many pens...feeling quit the same way, but never expressed so magnificantly...

bravo!!!!
aziza
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12 posted 09-26-2006 10:38 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Quite simply --

Yay!!!
passing shadows
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displaced


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don't know how I missed this one yesterday but glad I saw it today
The Lady
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LeeJ
you see so clearly  
thank you


my dear Stranger
you are much too modest
thank you for the word flowers
not a thorn among them…


thanks for the yay
aziza  

thank you
passing shadows…

Ratleader
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Bravo! This is a thing of beauty.
Kira Aso
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Closer to Hell...


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Very Lovely!
The Lady
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thank you Ed...


Kira
thanks!
amberhues
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A lovely duet!
Dominique-Simone
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Very good, and what an interesting voice you two have!!
writergrl
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you both fit together so well, as one heart and one voice...lovely, brava!

"You cannot stain a black coat."
Nicholas Nickleby

The Lady
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thank you amberhues

glad you enjoyed it
Monklet...


thank you writergrl
Alison
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It really does not get much better than this.

Love you both,
A
Angel4aKing
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23 posted 05-25-2011 06:02 PM       View Profile for Angel4aKing   Email Angel4aKing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel4aKing

Don't know hwo I missed this ... I really need to spend more time here....I go years in between...I thought it flowed very neatly!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

The Lady
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thank you Angel
as I recall it wrote itself
with ease

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