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evening in paradise |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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And so.... perpetually no clouds on this endless velveteen night my mind seizes acute enchantment penetrating celestial sensations crowd me like a lover's golden embrace innumerable offspring fuses wide-eyed promises I suckle mountainous vertical sea waves moistening my corn-silken piece of sky high earthy azure eyes spend astonishment like key colors luminous brawny unadulterated into some current of vivid twilight like an interlude of language watching sun-bleached sheets sailing into wild imaginings of this solace vegetation where the warmth of mosaic arpeggios speak an infamous blaze like the "Inferno of Dante" echoing a torah like vein rudiments to passages low humming philosophical supposition hangs along an accelerating scale of metaphoric rock of which I chisel away at gestures there is a magic made of song~ of life encroachments finding truth in absence ever plays & pours extra virgin olive oil I taste the shadow sentencer like ravenous hunger I intend to bleed ceaselessly pouring forth clumps of defiant cleavage into the wound of moans giving the child notice lamenting some inflammatory autonomy where inlets breath a few more days naked...and alive oh God... for the smell of that river and a mass embrace from this twilight night air can you feel it? can you touch it? gives the soul room to love beyond compare multiplying voices from a tired death fear not, morning doth come... finding lapped seams in rain a clean smell of union & pearls falling in love with the face of millions an intimate room that this house gives birth finding poverty of deepest darkness wanders off into some musical celebration of sound moss covered in available power where feelings & ideas become and it is perhaps stimulated for us to remember there is always light despite what one might believe... mine, has always been right there in front of me be lost in the soul of love [This message has been edited by LeeJ (09-26-2006 06:50 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You have elegant dreams. Very rich  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm always in awe of your words |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ Was reading with wonder at the way your mind sees, then that last "mine, has always been right in front of me" caught me and I thought....ahhh, how true for everyone. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it’s the lines like… sun-bleached sheets smell of that river moss covered and clean smell of union that keep me coming back I love this LeeJ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"an intimate room that this house gives birth to finding poverty of deepest darkness wanders off into some musical celebration of sound moss covered in available power of which feelings and ideas become and it is perhaps, stimulated for us to remember mine, has always been right in front of me lost in the soul of love" I believe you...."lost in the soul of love"...  .....jo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Leej, you do have a way with words....I'm lucky to get perhaps a third of that... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
wow, im in awe Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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