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The Lady
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you took your heart to venice  
with my blessing
I wanted you to go
really...

I said  
tell the pigeons  
in plaza san marco  
hello for me    
hold your arms wide  
my love    
let them eat
from your hands and shoulders  
  
you sent a picture  
pigeon on your shoulder    
both of you  
looking into the camera  
I don’t recognize the bird  
and did you have to smile so damn wide?  

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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incredible
thats your poetry, incredible
The Lady
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thank you very much Helen!

Seymour Tabin
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Lady
I've been there and they will do more than sit on your shoulder. LOL Well done
The Lady
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ah
Sir Sy
they will indeed
leave a small deposit
laughing...
thank you
WindWalker
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5 posted 09-24-2006 10:55 PM       View Profile for WindWalker   Email WindWalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindWalker

Yes your poetry is incredible!!!!!!!!!!!
The Lady
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thank you so much WindWalker!
LeeJ
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indeed, I echo, incredible!
Dark Stranger
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ladyone, I look forward to reading you
your world tours
are a worthy pleasure
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Delightful Kate.  I so enjoy reading you, and often peek in just to check on my favorite poets. You are indeed one of those poets.     Good morning, Lady.
sewasham
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Very nice. You always seem to capture a lot of feeling in your writes. Take care and Have fun. Steve

The Lady
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thank you very much LeeJ…

thanks for going ‘round the world with me
Stranger

thank you for your kind reply
Gentle Spirit…
good morning to you

thank you Steve
JamesMichael
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Maybe next time you can go...James
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"you sent a picture  
pigeon on your shoulder    
both of you  
looking into the camera  
I don’t recognize the bird  
and did you have to smile so damn wide?"

Wonderful Kate!
IWIHWT!
Hugs~Nancy
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Just perfect!
The Lady
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thank you James
next time anyone goes
I’m going…  


thank you Nancy  
hugs to you...

thank you Sandra…  

passing shadows
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whoa...loved the punch at the end there
Sunshine
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So glad this floated
back to the top...

you've a good eye, m'friend.



The Lady
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a little envy  
you think passing shadows?  
thank you


thank you Karilea    
always
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This was tooo good, he..he..he

To thy own self be true

playing.with.crayons
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oh yes. those piegeons.
myself and a friend had a bright idea of feeding one of them in san marco's square.
it was quite traumatising really.

The Lady
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thank you so much twinkyfl1

sure scared me the first time
playing

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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oh I was in Venice in September!! I love San Marco Plaza!  Loved your words here... beautiful Lady!  RDB
The Lady
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thank you Roniece  

did you feed the pigeons?
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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oooh nooo, I was a little scared of the pigeons!! LOL  RDB
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