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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-09-24 01:33 AM


I want to paint a masterpiece simply with the paintbrush of my fingertips
I want to stroke garish colors lavishly on the empty canvas of my mind
Filling each and every memory with primary red, blue and green
Mixing and clashing dripping colors to cry out like an Amazon parrot at dawn
Greeting the morning with a voracious wild abandon, yelling with primal need
Hey all, I survived the night!  I am alive for yet one more day!

I want to play a symphony with the strings that run from soul to heart
I want my body to dance under the moon, the stars, the Aurora, the sun
Strumming every emotion until they crescendo in an erotic climax
Never satiated, just wild gyrations writhing in shadows that haunt the day
Whispering sultry secrets as the wind moans with baritone demands
Hey all, I am here today!  I live for the dreams that feed my desires.

I want to sail the Seven Seas and make dunes from the salt of diamond tears
I want to fall off the edge of the world to careen into molten lava of need
Moving through transitional mindsets with confidence and knowledge
Creating a map that sets my course to fly to the sun.  Like Icirus, I fly
As I sing folk songs to the clouds, and harmonize with off-key dreams.
I’ll fly away.  I’ll fly to the blues that were sung and captured for eternity.

I want to be every Rubenesque painting framed by Monet, bordered by Picasso
I want to be played like Ravel’s Bolero and float on Pachabel’s Canon
Striding into history, I make it my present, and carry my future in my pocket
Each day is simply a page in an eternal empty book, begging to be filled
Each moment is the stroke of a pen, furled calligraphy that I create.
I’ll float to my imagination and nest in the folds of my creativity.

I want to live for the moment, love for tomorrow and lust for eternity.
It’s all I want.

aziza

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TwiztidKarma
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since 2006-09-22
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Florida
1 posted 2006-09-24 02:51 AM


I feel u ,
     I like it

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
2 posted 2006-09-24 07:26 AM


ms az...we all feel this way sometimes
it is the god of us seeping through
kewl stuff ms

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
3 posted 2006-09-24 07:59 AM


aziza, this was simply amazing; you captured me with your thoughts, which were so fulfilling and insightful, your imagination and thoughts blended with such harmony that it sang songs of life and wanting; we have so many things to say, but so many of them remain unsaid or written, here you show your intelligence and your beauty, your creativity and your soul and I just loved it all my friend. Thank you so much for sharing so much today. Be well my friend and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2006-09-24 11:29 AM


like Rick said...amazing!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-09-24 07:25 PM



wow
aziza
this line sang to me...

"Mixing and clashing dripping colors to cry out like an Amazon parrot at dawn"

love this poem
it's exhilarating!

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