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luminosity
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0 posted 2006-09-22 02:16 PM






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in memory of my nephew...

sigh

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-09-22 02:23 PM



What a beautiful way to leave thoughts of your love traced in our minds, dearheart.

You have etched the day with truth, and light.




luminosity
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2 posted 2006-09-22 02:30 PM


thank you lady...I hope that posting helps the sadness to fly to freedom as well...knowing is not the same as feeling...sigh
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3 posted 2006-09-22 02:34 PM


This is as beautiful as it is heartbreaking. Big hugs, my dear friend... hearthugs.
luminosity
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4 posted 2006-09-22 02:38 PM


thank you lady...our family is small, and with the loss of David, even more so...he was the next oldest boy after my son...and now I find that posting and talking about it makes me cry...I think I posted before I was ready...sigh
will take that hug...yeppers...I need it

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5 posted 2006-09-22 03:25 PM


ah sweeet lady...know that you and yours are being held closely...and that above is just lovely...absolute love......
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6 posted 2006-09-22 03:41 PM


I understand, dear lady... and wish I could deliver those hugs in person.
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7 posted 2006-09-22 04:14 PM


OhSweetLady~

I meet you in the times of tears
wondering why it rains so~

God, in His Infinite Mercy, be with you all~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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8 posted 2006-09-22 05:33 PM


Beautiful words full of hope and love...James
The Lady
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9 posted 2006-09-23 03:04 AM



a loving memorial
well written...


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10 posted 2006-09-23 08:39 AM


this is just so touching
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11 posted 2006-09-23 08:44 AM


Your nephew knows you miss him, trust in that. The fire of grief cools over time, but never fully extinguishes. Your cooling period is defined by you alone, it is personal. I know this, I have lived it. Rest assured there are those that understand, and hold you in their prayers. This is a lovely tribute to not only David, but to your love for him.

Sandra

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12 posted 2006-09-23 10:16 AM


Luminous One ~

I am so sorry to hear of your loss.

This would make a fine and comforting Hallmark card that could offer hope to those who are grieving the passing of a loved one.

So sad ~ and yet so beautiful.

Wrapping you in loving, comforting arms,
Linda

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13 posted 2006-09-23 04:38 PM


Such loss seems so selfish and not deserved
by anyone...And time is needed to heal,  
try to remember all that he gave you, gave
all of your family...learn from him....

God Bless and May you all be safe.

aziza
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14 posted 2006-09-23 05:06 PM


I am sorry for the loss of your special David and I thank you for sharing him with us.  Your poem is so beautiful and you displayed it perfectly.  Thank you and I am thinking of you and your family.

aziza

luminosity
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15 posted 2006-09-26 02:14 PM


thank you all...so much comfort sent can only make it easier to bear...thank you again
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