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Wheeee! |
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cwilk55 Junior Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 17OR |
Asking to enter, I was led to the most unlikely place The door was open...I stepped over the threshold I saw in amazement a labyrinth so complex, so intricate... I doubted my ability to negotiate it I decided to trust....no thinking allowed... The heart will lead the way...Listen, Listen Each turn was an assault upon my mind and heart Each clashing with the next Brilliant, wild, intense Softley, lovely, tender so cruel and harsh Sensual, wanton, raw Silly and funny Exsquisitly beautiful... Turning Turning As the scene changes I am moved tenderness to fear, lust to awe I try to flee...round and round...my senses blur there is no up or down or out... Then, my heart beating a steady rhythm I stand still There..in the center, I wait And now I see... There you are |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Aw....anticipation....well done! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Candy, I like how this builds. I gotta find that maze!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Candy...I think I've been on a similar ride....Wheeee, is right!!!  |
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cwilk55 Junior Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 17OR |
Thanx guys! Ya, those rides can be mighty fun but...you can't usually live there, ya know! |
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TwiztidKarma Junior Member
since 2006-09-22
Posts 43Florida |
I like it |
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