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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218


0 posted 2006-09-22 11:55 AM


A colorless autumn field;
dried grass moving in the wind
waiting for the fire;
all that remains
of love once sown here.

We called this place our heaven:
a song-filled haven
where we hid
our sinful pleasures.

In the passion of Summer
it surely was,
but now smoke rises
as a different fire burns.

I watch
a hungry fire consume that past
until nothing remains
but blackened, barren ground
exposed to rain and wind.

I cry in silence,
knowing my tears can never bring back
summer’s sweetness
nor be enough to saturate the soil
and yet the floodgates open
and tears flow like rain
upon a thirsty soil.

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-09-22 12:52 PM


So much said, in what was not.
After the fall...there is spring.
You wrote this beautifully.
TD

seraphin
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
2 posted 2006-09-22 12:55 PM


This is unquestionably lovely. From first line, to tear evoking end, a beautiful read.

Sandra

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