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Open Poetry #39

Without a Trace

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

0 posted 2006-09-22 11:54 AM

Without a trace she vanishes from sight
O what a misfortune to me befalls
To spend even one lost and lonely night
With naught to love but these transparent walls
My cross to bear if there ever should be
A sacrifice for the pain that is mine
Would that I could change these things before me
Enemy stoic death from hands of time

Not a trace nor word spoken of leaving
Veiled she is in some mind numb part of me
Placed there at the moment of the cleaving
To remain this way forever shall be
My one hope is to continue to yearn
For one day to grace me with her return

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2006-09-22 12:54 PM

Welcome, Refugee! You write well of love's illusion.

*wishfull*thinking*
Junior Member

since 2006-09-03

Posts 33
north east of england

2 posted 2006-09-22 02:12 PM

well done and welcome to piptalk

keep up the good work
*wishfull*thinking*

previously know as poise and rationality and sins and tragdegies but long story

*coz i've seen lopve die way too many times when it deserved to be

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

3 posted 2006-09-22 02:26 PM

Thank you for the welcome and the kindness...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-09-22 05:37 PM

When you can say, I don't want her to return, she is free...James

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2006-09-22 05:40 PM

Not without a trace is she
her echo lingers on in thee...

*hugs*

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