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Open Poetry #39
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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
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0 posted 2006-09-22 03:48 AM


My promises are fire in your hand
Steaming hot trails along your arms
Slow, deep, licks in your throat

Streaks of remembrance for eternity


~Sunkissed.
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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-09-22 09:50 AM

I really love this one!
Thanks for sharing
Refugee
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since 2006-08-04
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2 posted 2006-09-22 11:58 AM

Sometimes the briefest are the most profound, because they make you keep on thinking of all the possiblities, like this one.
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2006-09-23 06:01 PM

So sensuous with such simplicity.  
I like lots.

aziza
D.Lester Young
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4 posted 2006-09-23 08:32 PM

Much enjoyed.
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-09-24 07:46 PM



"My promises are fire in your hand"

great work!
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