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Open Poetry #39

What of tears

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-09-21 11:18 PM

What of tears

Give nothing to my sashay skin to level their cells.
I will be patient, till then you’ll see me                                                                               In the grass that grows too long before it’s cutting.

You would betray my worded numbers, for a
New grazing on the sills of dawn’s creativity,
wherein robins share their story.

Let no words take tolls on me, or the lists of         alliterations in some writings that I do,
I would not have written them.

You are in my confidence, my little teardrop drinker                                                     you have used your hours for solicitation

I am the two-toed wanderer

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

1 posted 2006-09-22 12:20 PM

This is fantastic! I've read it over and over, and am no less impressed with each reading. There is imagery that breathes, words that scream out whispered ideas. Very, very well done.

Sandra

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-09-25 02:02 AM

glad I came down the page so I didn't miss this one

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