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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-09-21 10:42 AM


Rewrite:


Expression

Of fantasies my stock and trade
In wily wiles and dream cascade
Where pendulum swings steady time
And disregards the sweet of rhyme

There lies my spool of fantasy
Its thread my stock of ecstasy
From moments gone of pass and loss
Where beauty lies of glass emboss

I leave the weary of my day
Sail a ship through sandman’s way
Find a shoal where sleeps a dove
And spend the night an Isle of love

I build my castles on its shore
Dispense the grace I would and more
I touch upon infinity
Or close in its vicinity

It is a pixel dot of peace
That helps me with my present lease


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-09-21 10:56 AM


Seymour~
I was sitting her staring at the screen,
looking for that one poem that would burn a thought into my mind ...

I found it !!!!!

'I leave the weary of my day
Sail a ship through sandman’s way
Find a shoal where sleeps a dove
And spend the night an Isle of love

I build my castles on its shore
Dispense the grace I would and more
I touch upon infinity
Or close in its vicinity

It is a pixel dot of peace
That helps me with my present lease'


Does NOT get better than this~

LOVE that 'pixel dot of peace'~

How beautiful you are ... thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-09-21 11:10 AM


wow! I read this and see what I've been missing all this time!!

I'm glad to be able to read your morning word weavings, Sy

thank God for internet right in my room LOL

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-09-21 05:40 PM


Marge,
Thank you for this dove.

passing,
You never fail me.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-09-21 06:31 PM




"I leave the weary of my day
Sail a ship through sandman’s way
Find a shoal where sleeps a dove
And spend the night an Isle of love"

just delightful
Sir Sy...

Snowflake From Hell
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5 posted 2006-09-21 06:36 PM


wonderful read

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-09-21 06:47 PM


Lady,
I delight in your reply.

Snowflake,
Thank you so much.

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