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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-09-21 07:44 AM


As the sun shines
vespa on shoulders bare
I feel you there
pressed between the pages
of my mind

as shimmers speak
on whisper winds
I recall the softness
of your laughter

caught in mid-air
when you watched
through crystal skies
as morning lingered
to play in my thoughts

breath suddenly caught

as you covered me
and a new day.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-09-21 09:21 AM


how vivid!! I love this!
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-09-21 09:40 AM


Hi'ya Dixie     good morning, and thanks.
seraphin
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3 posted 2006-09-21 02:00 PM


Sensual and tender. I love this one, too!

Sandra

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-09-21 05:25 PM



yes
very sensual
lovely Donna...


MukkaKukka
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5 posted 2006-09-21 06:35 PM


when I read the title I couldn`t help hearing in my mind the guitar of Jimmy page

"Your stairway lies lies on the whisp`rin` wind"

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2006-09-21 07:06 PM


thank you all for the blessings of your replies..

M! Yess...oh Jimmy knew how to play it....
And Robert knew how to sing it....

oh, you just took me back....and brought a smile.  Thank you friend...

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7 posted 2006-09-23 03:41 PM


Well, the read and the replies were well
worth the time taken....thanx Donna.

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2006-09-25 03:03 PM


thank you Barry.....
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2006-09-25 07:45 PM


Enjoyed...a lot...James
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2006-09-25 08:39 PM


thank you, James.  
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