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Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
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In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-09-20 09:53 PM



A sifting of ideals
in recompense
composed.

A boy in reddened ribbons
a king I once deposed
He ruled a land of nothing
and never was morose

An edifice of stone
in elegy
defined.

A king in greying shrouds
a boy I once interred.
He rules a land of markers
and all there now defer.

A litany of minds.
A blood stain on the door.
A moment of elation
and a boy that I abhor
is underneath my floor.

I didn't kll him quickly
or even kill him once.
Every time I close my eyes
is another time he dies.

"We all know Major Tom's a junkie"

Ashes to Ashes - David Bowie

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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-09-20 10:51 PM



outstanding
LT...


seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004
Michigan
2 posted 2006-09-20 11:43 PM


Outstanding sums it up perfectly. Wonderful, wonderful poem.

Sandra

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