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Open Poetry #39

One last note

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2006-09-20 09:10 PM

I have never been what I wished
and all I have achieved is this
echoing and repeating list
inside the nothing I posses

( drip drip blood mist
deep bite love kissed
anything less missed
palm read life line
whisper flat line
red drink old frown
love lost time drowned
cold skin heart downed
dream deep dead found )

( goodbye
no lie
dream deep
dead keep
always sleep
never wake
nothing waits
lie still
end will )

There is no end of this regret
and all I have to leave is this

I'm sorry that I can't explain.
I hurt too much
or not enough
I asked for help
but you did not
You tried so it's
not your fault.
No blame at all.
I just have to say goodbye to you
and that I'm so sorry too.
I love you.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-09-20 10:50 PM

reads so well
I like it
LT...

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

2 posted 2006-09-20 11:46 PM

Two for two tonight. Another work worthy of praise.

Sandra

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2006-09-21 06:17 PM

fear of the number 13...i agree it does read well

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

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