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Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

0 posted 2006-09-20 05:05 PM

The words are wild stallions
Penned inside the mind
All in a state of eagerness
Waiting, and biding their time

Oh, to be free under the sun
To roam the green grass fields
I cannot begin to express
How much their wildness heals

The wind through the hair
As you soar across the plain
Freedom is a real, tangible thing
In this way shall not be tamed

Liberate me, set the words to run
Let them over you, cascade
Set on fire as immortal as the sand
To burn, rather than fade

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-09-20 05:28 PM

Well, poet, you had me from the first line! Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting...

and you can be guaranteed I'll be waiting to read more of your work!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-09-20 08:30 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Very much enjoyed your first post.
TD

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-09-20 10:42 PM

welcome Refugee...
your poem moves
enjoyed it...

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2006-09-21 02:35 PM

Refugee,
Welcome to Passions'. You have certainly set a high standard for yourself with an excellent first post. I look forward to reading more from you. Keep up the good work.

INclan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-09-21 03:50 PM

nicely done!! Welcome to Passions!

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

6 posted 2006-09-21 06:04 PM

you already seem liberated by those words

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

Refugee
Member

since 2006-08-04

Posts 97

7 posted 2006-09-22 12:27 PM

Thank you all so much.

I will hope to write more and in the mean time, will continue to read as much as I can, if not reply as much as I'd like to.

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

8 posted 2006-09-22 09:48 PM

Wow, I love this piece, it really sent my mind free and wandering. Welcome to Passions, I'm new too

Can't wait to see more of your poems!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2006-09-22 09:54 PM

smile

I am a recently reformed refugee--and as I told a friend here at Pip, there IS a difference between a refugee and an evacuee--RESERVATIONS.

And I have no reservation regarding your welcome, so hugs, fellow gypsy.

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

10 posted 2006-09-23 08:39 PM

Very strong first stanza and excellent follow through.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2006-09-23 08:42 PM

WOW! A fantastic entrance you have made here!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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