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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2006-09-19 05:47 PM


intimate impact
approachment of unwanted
company from the outside
before the confusion
somebody diverse
dressed somberly
walked in a game
a trance
to halt a school
disrupt a cycle.


thousands of learners
less one
away today
do come back another day
sweet school of choice


Walked in a hunt
pursuit
of anybody next
although it was he
wanted it to be
and the parents?
what do they know
about a smiling face
turned bad
to hate rather than mend
before routes are set
traps go off

thousands of students
sad today
less one
do come back another day
take back the school
yours to study in
leave belongings inside

It takes courage
to withdraw ones sting
before any strike
before education is foiled
if the child ever learned
to preserve
sweet school of choice




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (09-20-2006 01:19 AM).]

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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2006-09-19 06:05 PM


sad when everyone is afraid to be in school, amazing people get guns into them undetected nice emphasys on that subject

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 483
on the way to next world
2 posted 2006-09-19 08:46 PM


unfortunately the one victim was a cousin to a friend from work and hardly was of legal age...sympathy is not enough to get to the root of the issue.


wordwizard
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3 posted 2006-09-19 08:46 PM


unfortunately the one victim was a cousin to a friend from work and hardly was of legal age...sympathy is not enough to get to the root of the issue.


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